Well the picture is great, good color tones, interesting pose but still have some details than dont make the drawing perfect...

(I want say that all of it is my opinion and I dont have the fucking good level of Norke)

well first thing that I dont like is his face expresion for me it kills all the drawing i think that dont runs with her pose, she looks susprised but Ithink that is exaggerate for his pose :S,

maybe if she dont look to the camera they look bette r for his pose, is hard to explain with my english level but they expresion and maybe his hair is the main thing that i dont like in the picture,

well in the Chat I told you before about the bacground that dont suits to her history, but ok is good draw her in other place.

maybe would be better use more colors on the trees more ligths and shadows .

I think that you shoyuld try to use more pencils for make the leaves.

they are good but when you see that the trees and the grass near the water have the same leaves looks weird.

I hope taht be useful, is my first critique and my english is poor but Im tried to make it good

great illustration not perfect for me but was close, (I prefer others of your gallery )

For me, her head is the first thing I notice, as it seems somewhat out of place. I think perhaps it's a little too big for her body, and also her eyes seem very bulgey. I also think her face is straight on almost, but her head is angled, which makes her head as a whole look skewed.

I've given only 2.5stars for impact because this piece doesn't really invole any emotions in me or cause me to become attached to it, which your other works do. Usually in your pieces I can start to imagine some story behind it, but this I just can't, it's just a girl with wings sat near a river Also I think it's cropped a little too close to her, it seems weird with half her wing off the endge like that.

Of course, this piece is still beautiful artistically The colours are lovely, she stands out nicely with those vibrant pinky red colours. I also like the way her toes are curled up, it makes her seem happy and playful

My fav part of the image has to be the water though. The reflection is accurate, which seems hard for a lot of people. The fish look like they're playing too ^_^

I can tell you've really given a lot of thought to the detail in this piece. Every leaf, bit of moss, every brush stroke was clearly well thought out and deliberate.


I think if you can bear to repaint her head this piece will be stunning